You all received your Most Powerful Word papers back. You have until Wednesday, October 12th to revise your papers. Stay after school if you have questions about comments and do not just add or subtract words or sentences. Take the essay apart and reassemble it! Revision is about knocking down a brick wall and using the old bricks and new bricks to rebuild an even sturdier wall! (What an analogy!)
Mr. Francisco
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